Feedback on About page
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Setting up a new website from scratch – working on my about page, would love some feedback on my first draft. Haven’t got the call to action sorted yet but will circle back to that
http://chrisc65.sg-host.com/about/
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I would make the text black, not grey.
I’d put a CTA further up the page, not just at the bottom.
If you have more testimonials, put a couple more further up.
The first paragraph should be broken up more. Full-width paragraphs of 4+ lines are just too bulky.
Do you happen to have a photo of you actually practicing?
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