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  • Feedback on About page

     David Risley updated 1 year ago 2 Members · 2 Posts
  • Chris Chippendale

    Member
    September 18, 2020 at 6:52 pm

    Setting up a new website from scratch – working on my about page, would love some feedback on my first draft. Haven’t got the call to action sorted yet but will circle back to that

    http://chrisc65.sg-host.com/about/

  • David Risley

    Administrator
    September 22, 2020 at 9:58 am

    I would make the text black, not grey.

    I’d put a CTA further up the page, not just at the bottom.

    If you have more testimonials, put a couple more further up.

    The first paragraph should be broken up more. Full-width paragraphs of 4+ lines are just too bulky.

    Do you happen to have a photo of you actually practicing?

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