Feedback on About page

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      • September 18, 2020 at 6:52 pm #3523742

        Setting up a new website from scratch – working on my about page, would love some feedback on my first draft. Haven’t got the call to action sorted yet but will circle back to that

        • September 18, 2020 at 6:52 pm #3523773

          I would make the text black, not grey.

          I’d put a CTA further up the page, not just at the bottom.

          If you have more testimonials, put a couple more further up.

          The first paragraph should be broken up more. Full-width paragraphs of 4+ lines are just too bulky.

          Do you happen to have a photo of you actually practicing?

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